commentment

• Artist: Princesses Allelujah
• Description: hiding from fear of love
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: commentment

living in a life field with bitter pain
theirs no measure to how much
or what it may be

but your living your life hiding
from your weakness
never would you commit to me or
anyone

theres not any reason but fear its self
always getting in your way
theres hiding the truth
not from just everyone but from yourself

putting others before your problem
to hide from what you heart desires
love and to be loved
you hide

Comments

[Stormlight]

I'm a bit confused about your title. Commentment isn't a word. Unless you deliberately made up a word for the title (that has nothing to do with the subject of your poem), I believe what you were trying to spell was "Commitment". To commit to something is entirely different than commenting on something. This poem really needs to be edited. It's riddled with errors. Run it thoroughly through a spell check AND a grammar check before I could ever call it "good".

[xX_vampiregothicwoman_Xx]

i like it sis it is very good and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year !

[Ryan Russell]

I like it. I know its not "vital" persay, to writing poetry, but you will definitely get higher ratings if you use capitalization and spellcheck! (plus people will be more likely to send links to friends so they can see your potry!)
Anyways-It just makes things look better so I greatly recommend it!

[This Accident]

I like it a lot.