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My mum
The clouds are white,
the sky is blue,
so is your heart,
so are you.
Such a pure person,
a person like no other.
Such a deep love,
the love that gives my mother.
No one is perfect
and so is she,
but she's a perfect mum
according to me.
- Title: My mum
- Artist: Hueida
- Description: I'm not a great poet and I don't think I'll ever be. Anyway, I'm doing this just for fun. I'm not very good in English, so if there are some mistakes... well who cares.
- Date: 12/24/2008
- Tags: mumheartlovemotherperfect
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Comments (2 Comments)
- the ivory lily - 12/27/2008
- im bein honest the structure isnt too good n the wording it a bit strange but its a good poem it gets a 3/5
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- Hueida - 12/27/2008
- plz leave comments
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