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i sit in the dark
waiting for you
you said you would come
was that true?
you've left me here
all alone
i felt in my pocket
my mobile phone
i called you on your mobile
you said "who is it?"
i asked you where you were
but you had a fit
i rushed to your house
and asked your parents where you went
they said the hospital
you had a fit on the pavement
i rushed to the hospital
i asked for your room
i went in a saw you
you were staring at the moon
i said "you ok?"
and you turned around
you stared at me and smiled
then fell to the ground
i called for help
doctors rushed in
he is dying, they said
will death win?
i went in
and held your hand
you looked at me and smiled
you sat up but could not stand
"i love you" you managed to say
"i love you too" i said
i kept helding your hand
you layed down in the bed
your eyes then shut
the machine was fried
because at that moment
you had just died.
- by Luna Deslumbrado |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/24/2008 |
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- Title: The sad love story
- Artist: Luna Deslumbrado
- Description: this is a sad love story, please read and leave a comment
- Date: 12/24/2008
- Tags: love story upsetting
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Comments (6 Comments)
- shanito11 - 12/31/2008
- awww, that's so sad!!!!
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- xIKittyx - 12/31/2008
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thats was really good.
made me cry. - Report As Spam
- Kyros_Rose - 12/31/2008
- Oh wow, That so sweet. It made me cry.
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- XxxBananasxxX - 12/24/2008
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made me cry..(sniff sniff)
it was wonderful - Report As Spam
- Hard_2_Own - 12/24/2008
- O.O i love your work!
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- awesomesistah - 12/24/2008
- wow! Bravo!
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