The Kiss

• Artist: duir ancient
• Description: This poem was inspired both by a past experience and a desire for the future. It's the only love poem I've ever written, one of the few cheerful poems I've ever been capable of, and, thank goodness, it's copyrighted lol. If you feel like printing it and giving it to someone that means a lot to you, feel free, but do me a favor and leave my name on it. Oh, and vote on it... if you like it, then say so. Pweese?
  
• Date: 12/29/2008
• Tags: kiss love

The Kiss
ⓒ2008 Noah Vale

The kiss that you gave me
With lips soft and sweet
Gave birth to a shiver
From my head to my feet
The look in your eyes
Shook me to my core
I kissed you again
But that made me want more
So I held you to me
And I stole one more kiss
But I couldn’t stop there
You'd shown my heart bliss
I wanted another
Or maybe even two
In fact, I didn’t want to
Stop kissing you
I doubt that I could've
It felt so right
Lying there kissing
Deep into the night
Now its the morning
You’re soundly asleep
But the sight of your lips
Still makes my heart leap
I leave a kiss on your cheek
As soft as a dove
Until you awaken
My beauty, my love

Comments

[Baby-Moon-Kitty]

Hey Hon. I am going to give the poem to my girlfriend. but not this exact one. I am going to give her the one you originally gave me. I hope you dont get mad. I will Say its from you.

[soccer biatch]

i loved your poem so mutch that i had to show it to my friend write away...its the best poem i have read and its just so amazing that its leaving me speachless...

[Alibis of the Heart]

Wow, this is amazing! I really like it. I rarely write happy poems myself, so I have to give you props for writing such a spectacular piece^^

[Star of the Desert]

i love it.

[Star of the Desert]

OMG i love it mike. keep up the good worke. smile

[The_Doctors_Wife]

Wow.

[happily ended]

u go Patch!!!!