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It was christmas,but the world was at war,
There was no joy deep inside of the core
of my heart,my mother died,
my father lied,
faded memories of love and compassion,
lingered in my heart,
i tried to run away from it all but it caught up,
and pulled me down into a deep pit of despair and hate,
at the bottom there was earth,
i sunk deep to sleep under forever
the light faded,my eyes closed,
i was dead
there was no hope
the end of life
- by xX Super Dino Rawrs Xx |
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- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Date: 12/31/2008
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- The Guardian Of Cats - 11/08/2009
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It Really Emotional... I LOVE IT 10/5
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- xoxkenny93xox - 01/23/2009
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my god i love it ^^
its really good
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- tampico-chan - 01/08/2009
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okay, i read the sequel, so now ive read both.
very good. deppressing, like a lot of mine. -_-;; but very good.
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- xX Super Dino Rawrs Xx - 01/02/2009
- i just felt like doing something kinda depressing,i dont know why....
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- Xx_Making-Time_xX - 01/02/2009
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wow, that's like, wow, but why is it so depressing? i know mine was but stilll, christmas at war. It's good but.......
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- xX Super Dino Rawrs Xx - 12/31/2008
- i hope you like my poem
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