sen no yoru wo koete

• Artist: juvieboy
• Description: this is a poem i wrote out of anger a time ago
  it continues my poem schizophrenia
• Date: 01/01/2009
• Tags: yoru koete hurt schizophrenia

Do you have a voice inside
telling you what to do
what to say
well i do and it took 5yrs just
to come out and say it and tell it
to everybody
cause i don't give a ******** what you
think of me
the things you say and think only
strengthen me and give me pride
in what i am and how i do
and the way i act so say it and
tell it
cause i'll yell it and tell ya
the only thing hats wrong with me is you
so ******** off and i'll tell it the way it
is i may not be normal to ya'll but i'll
act the way i want to
and thats the only thing that matters to
i don't need anybody i don't have nobody
all they do is blow me off in the end once
they find out who i really am
i'm a drug addict a tweaker
a criminal and a player all at the
same time
so why i try to be with them
because and old man said
"if you give up now you'll never truly
be with me, up there"

Comments

[Muse_of_the_Soul]

Well, decently written. However, I'd just like to point out that the name is from a Bleach movie. Come up with an original name for it, and I'll rate it.

[Sapphire_Honuka_73]

wow, it's really good and i know what you mean. i also write down my anger in my poems, it's the easiest feeling to write down and tell someone. i'll give it a 5/5 and i can't wait to see some of your other ones!!