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A person starts out like a flame,
Burning bright and not going lame,
Until a gust of wind blows,
Blowing out it's heart and soul,
Leaving nothing but burnt ash,
And a sad memory of what has come to pass.
- by FlameBlazeKim |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/02/2009 |
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- Title: A Memory
- Artist: FlameBlazeKim
- Description: This is just a little poem i wrote when i was bored at lunch... Let's see how you like it! You don't have to vote fairly if you don't want to, but if there are some modifications that could be made, please leave a comment. Thank you!
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: memory
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Comments (3 Comments)
- FlameBlazeKim - 01/04/2009
- Thank you for all your support, everyone! whee Oh, and for the people that give me a score lower than a 5, please leave a comment so that i can make it the best it can be. Thanks again!
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- Ferah Sortah - 01/03/2009
- Wonderful!
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- Rein Pein - 01/03/2009
- awesome, a great poem it had somewhat emotion i-i-i (cries in corner)BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!
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