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Fate bring us together promise that we will stay with each other.
How come now you are gone,left me here all alone.
The night is coming the darkness is around me.
Suddenly a light come down to Earth and save me.
You promise to stay with me love me forever.
But in the end I realised it was just a lie.
Now I have learn the life rules,no one really loves me.
So will it forever be no one can changes my love.
Back again I return to the darkness.Fate bring us together and Fate tear us apart.
- by Aaron_Fans |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/04/2009 |
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- Title: Fate
- Artist: Aaron_Fans
- Description: This is for one person that have save me from the darkness and left me.
- Date: 01/04/2009
- Tags: fatedarknessalonelove
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Lavastone - 01/14/2009
- you ARE "poetisk" heh
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- Aaron_Fans - 01/11/2009
- Thank you I'll take this advice and make a better one.
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- Tahimah - 01/06/2009
- 5 stars
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- sweet little mouse - 01/04/2009
- Definitely a lot of feeling in this, a lot of rawness. Your sentences are sort of running together though, and I think if you broke it up into more structured verses, or used better punctuation, it would flow much more nicely. smile
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