The good times are over.

• Artist: E p s i i l o n_
• Description: Nehh.
• Date: 01/04/2009
• Tags: good times over

S h i f t;
A golden hand, extended,
sunlight touches
vivid eyes, a stroke of absolute
affection--
boiled hearts in
dirty water,
We are ghosts in plastic vases,
vanish, varnish, finish, tarnish,
I used bleach,
but it didn't come out.

Comments

[zabu o v o]

aww yiss.

[Wicker Chair]

i have been boggled. your the new TS Eliot, I dare say.

[sweet little mouse]

This is interesting... it feels like you are saying quite a few things with only a few verses to interpret. Definitely a thought-provoker, and many people can't successfully write a poem that doesn't lay the meaning of it before you on a silver platter, but you've managed to catch the mystery of it and present it in a way that makes it look well thought-out and not a spastic random blurb with the label "poetry" slapped on it. I like it. smile

I'll be thinking about this one for a while. 5/5