Pool of razors

• Artist: Apocalyptic Beatdown
• Description: My soul is a pool full of razors. Take the journey.
• Date: 01/09/2009
• Tags: feet pool razors

Take a dive into my soul, close your eyes
stay in the middle don't touch the sides!
I'll be your guide
my voice your vision
drown not in the deepness
of the pool you swim in
only doused in the wake
of the pain in my heart
special that you are
to have come this far
might you sink
in the blood
of my past failure
my secrets can't escape
turn back-
impale ya
swim through my darkness
my pain will refine you
heal you
cleanse
if only you survive
as you dive
so deep in a pool full of razors
the blood leaks slow
but the pain will amaze you
though the pain that I've felt
only grazes you
torrent of my soul
deluge in my fears
only the meanest creatures
swim the waters in here
from a child to a man
every thought that I had
insight
sublime
your mind will understand...
or drive you mad
death is your savior
here lies your soul
in my pool full of razors.

Comments

[Zlae]

What? This 'idea' is very overrated. You need to make it different from all of the others, somehow, someway.

[in my quotation marks]

<tilts head> Interesting. Detailed and deep, though it could have done without the 'u's. On the other hand, perhaps such a thing fits the scene? Well, Five of five, then.

[Izumi Tasuri]

it speaks into my soul, i visualy took a dive into my pool of dead kittens XD 5/5 verry good bro>>> (>*A*)>

[Apocalyptic Beatdown]

simple enough, my soul is a deep pool of razors.

[Akirekira]

wow, a depth iof pain, so detaild I can feel the pain, slightly and faintl but still, beautifull, 5/5 and fav!!!

[Romanchikku na Zetsubou]

Huh? I don't really get it, but it's good.