Soliloquy

• Artist: iBrightScales
• Description: Well, my internet was out for a few days.
  So I attempted to conquer my boredom by writing this.
  Please comment with your opinions!
  
  <3
• Date: 01/13/2009
• Tags: soliloquy

Silent:
Like jumbled whispers in the breeze;
Tossed and turned and lost all meaning;
Only hoping to one day meet the ocean.

Unspoken:
Wounded with knives of raw emotion;
Bottled up with yesterday’s wine;
Seeping out of the lonely cracks.

Screaming:
Curdling blood from the highest altars;
Tugging at the sanity we’ve tucked away;
Now left in ashes and cold concrete.

Our voices shatter this reality …..

Calling out to all we’ve destroyed.

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Excellent work, here. A question I have long pondered, "is the way the words in a poem are written as much art as the words themselves?" I say yes. A unique positional and placement style can be very effective in increasing meaning and power.

[SorenKrane]

I really liked this. You are really talented. You probably don't have to underline or use italics to emphasize words because they are already powerful.