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• Artist: xXBurned_Before_DawnXx
• Description: i was sad when i wrote this so its kind depressing. its a bout this couple who decide to end their relationship and just be friends and they stay good friends but it hurts the boy who still has feelings for her so he ends the friendship because he thinks its best for her and him
• Date: 01/15/2009
• Tags: untitled

These tears that fall
they fall for you
morphing this dream
and making me blue
this sorrow filled nightmare has to end
i can see the light
just round the bend
but the tears wont stop falling
they keep coming down
my time with you im stalling
the end is coming now
i do not wish to part
but it must be done
now that this is over
ill have no such fun
ill cry
And ill wish for you
and only you

Comments

[xx_angelonearth_xx]

everytime i read this i cry,
and by the comments so does everyone else...
great job, it takes a great author to make everyone relate to their soul
love this
5/5 from me
~Maritza ♥

[Blazing Pyrodeviant]

awesome, its soo deep...
i culd relate to this poem...
10/5

[Axel 02-013]

oh, here I go again....
Lucretcia, where are you baby!!!
Why did you leave me????
good job
XP

[x-Everlasting Innocence-x]

nice, it brought tears to my eyes...
wish i could give you more than a 5