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Seperated from light,
I got no where to go,
but into the darkness,
entering the shadows,
while wondering whats beyond,
and thinking of turning back.
- Title: Darkness
- Artist: kingjojo3
- Description: Please... Its the best I can think of, I know its depressing, so if you don't like depressing poems. Then Skip this one.
- Date: 01/22/2009
- Tags: darkness
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/22/2009
- darkness is pretty much the defination of poertry and ur poem is just fine with darkness. way to go
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- Pretty Little Muffin - 01/22/2009
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You should add some more smile
The poem definitely has potential razz
4/5 biggrin
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