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people who think life is fun
eat chocolates, ice-creamrs and buns
people who think life is knowledge
start to study and go to college
people who think life is challenge
go and perfom on stage
people who think life is boring
go to bed and start snorring
but life is a gift of God
give by the almighty lord
- by Candied Snow |
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- | Submitted on 01/23/2009 |
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- Title: life
- Artist: Candied Snow
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Description:
i wrote this in history class since i was bored
i'm only 12 and this is my 1st poem so pls vote fairly - Date: 01/23/2009
- Tags: life
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Mr_King_Endymion01 - 10/18/2009
- Nice It good wrote
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- 290DarkStars - 01/25/2009
- Nice flow, good moral, shameless faith. ok i must say it I LOVE IT 5/5 man! this stuff rocks! and thats not only bcz im an on-fire-gotta-have-more addicted Jesus freak! hopefully like you.
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- Over Death Boy - 01/24/2009
- nice...!
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- Saturn El - 01/24/2009
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I hope your faith in god doesnt die like mine did.
good insight. good flow. 5 stars - Report As Spam
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