Why can't i be free?

• Artist: holy_angel_of_doom
• Description: i just made it on the spot so dont criticeze too much.
• Date: 01/28/2009
• Tags: free useless unloved

I can see the ocean, i can see the trees
I can see the butterfly, the dragonfly, and the bees.
I can see the petals slowly, gently, flowting down.
I can feel the wind brushing through my sleeping gown.

Lying on the grass in my back yard, it made me realize.
That im not free like them.
I am traped in my own house,
in my own world,
and in my own mind.

Thinking about what should I do,
Thinking about my future,
But dont you think its useless,
If your not free or at least get into a mess?

Comments

[Airien_sama]

Very nice....I like it, I think it does need some more work here and there but I like it.

[lemonpop]

I really like it :3 i think the last two lines might need a little work but it was very good otherwise n.n