in your eyes

• Artist: go-green-girl45
• Description: it is cool becauseit has vampires in it
• Date: 02/07/2009
• Tags: your eyes

in your eyes all i can see is darkness that go's on for ever.
sometimes i never know if i will be pluled down in to the darkness.
the darkness only spells one thing the thrst for my blood.


the way you look at me is giving me the cills why whont you just bit me i say in my mind.
you look at me in a fasion i have never seen bit me bit me i say in my mind agian.
finnly you look at me and then in one big soof i flet paine i have never flet befor .
then i look up and ther he was looking at me he had a mirror i look at m slfe.






I WAS A VAMPIRE

Comments

[Precious Misery]

i like it,but Elegant is rite,there are SO many spelling errors lol

[Wicked Monstrosity]

Just call me when you want me to write a story for you, and Ill give you full credit : /

[Wicked Monstrosity]

No no wait! almost 4! (srry, constructive critisism) it need MUCH better spelling... why dont you let me type it for you???

[Wicked Monstrosity]

o___o How did it get an average score of 3?

[Wicked Monstrosity]

Awesome smile 5/5