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as the sun comes up on my horrable day i wake up walk around and there i lay
crashing to the floor knocking the breath right out of me as i lay there i
think out of all my days i have never had a good one now im high and above
now im finley haveing a good one
- by tenten_freak1_fan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/10/2009 |
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- Title: death
- Artist: tenten_freak1_fan
- Description: i think it says a lot of my life
- Date: 02/10/2009
- Tags: death
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- AceOfTheHeart - 07/05/2009
- hmm..... its notg bad but its not good either..... you described your feeling you just need to be more descriptve...... and most pepole like longer poems but me i could care less 4/5
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