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The mood of the day is diming.
Another day has come to an end.
darkness falls across the sky.
the sun sets, the moon rises,
taking its place. Many say,
Darkness is so perdictable,
but I disagree, it is a meaning
of coolness, and calmness,
time to unwind, rest, and relax.
I have 30 minutes to make my
day's ending a good one,
I can do it, but I feel as though
some unreliable force has added
a 1oo pound weight to my back,
pushing my spine to it's breaking
point....sigh.....this day was good,
2moro will be better, and everyday
gets even better ^_^
- by Singystar94 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/12/2009 |
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- Title: A Day Ends
- Artist: Singystar94
- Description: This was actually a response to a friends pm. I decided it was worth putting in the arenas. Please rate it and comment it. I was doing it quickly and I copied right from the pm, so please don't hurt me becquse of my grammar used.
- Date: 02/12/2009
- Tags: singystar94 dayends darkness
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Singystar94 - 02/27/2009
- Don't you remember? this was a pm I sent you that day I was killing time. ^_^
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- AimiToraChouKokoro - 02/23/2009
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I like the way you chose to depict the day and darkness.. that was really cool. =]
Good luck removing that 100pound from your back.
It's great that, despite a weight on your back, and your mood dimming with the day, that you were still able to smile and enjoy the day you had, and to look forward to even better days! Props to you for that! =D hehe - Report As Spam
- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 02/14/2009
- pritty ^^ 5/5
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