He Has The Remote To My Life

• Artist: m a n ii r o
• Description: Well, it's not really much of a poem.
  It's just something I thought of,
  and I really like how it sounded.
  So I posted it to get some feedback.
  This my first time ever posting ANYTHING in the arenas
  So I'm really excited.
  :]
  
  -Kookie <3
• Date: 02/12/2009
• Tags: life heartbreak love

I knew I should have moved on,
But it was like I was paused...
And I kept wanting to rewind to be with him again...

Comments

[Zurah]

Change that first '...' to a comma, and you'll improve the poem tenfold.

2/5.