RaiNbOW

• Artist: imbecile09
• Description:
• Date: 02/17/2009
• Tags: rainbow

listen close...
as the rain falls down...
its always the good times
that goes by so fast...
just like dust...
that falls to the ground...
as the days carelessly pass..
but through it all...
in each and every life..
a rain must fall..
even under shadows..
I'll tell you my friend..
just wait and you'll see..
that a day always has an end...
with a rainbow...
for you and me...

Comments

[Atheshya]

Every line shouldn't have a '...' at the end. It's distracting.

[jeejee.2]

cut out the "but through..." to the end and leave the beginning and it would improve