Broken Heart Broken World

• Artist: x_x pryzm_x_
• Description: Basically this was a quick poem so might not be good lol. Anyway it is about a person whose basically lost their true love and well this fall apart lol. I know been done so many times but My first poem in a while.
  
  Enjoy!
• Date: 02/20/2009
• Tags: broken heart broken world

In my mind all I contemplate is you
Why I do this, I don’t know why
I torture myself with memories of us
The moments when we lay on the beach
Under the scotching sun and imagine the future.

My future is grim without you
You were the only thing that made sense in my life.
Now you are gone I don’t see the point in my life anymore
I cry everyday for you and to God to be kind and for you to come back to me
But I know you wont .

See the look in your eyes on faitful day you sent my world crushing down with a bang !
Was the day I knew I’d lost you forever.
I can’t stand this sharp pain i feel in my heart , I just can’t
I sit in my room in darkness contemplating my last wish on this forsaken world
I would trade my life for just one second with you

To just touch you face and to see your breathtaking smile
But I know it wont happen .
I sigh my last breath before leaving this world
I will miss you my love and I have and will always Love you .

Bang !

Comments

[x_x pryzm_x_]

thank you scitama much appreciated biggrin

[scitama]

Very Nicely Done. It reminded my of the book 'Wizard's First Rule' when the main hero isheartbroken like so.

[x_x pryzm_x_]

To starfly

thank you so much biggrin

[x_x pryzm_x_]

aha if i put the french one none will understand it loool but thanxs duude for your honest input muc appreciated biggrin

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

i like it a lot! its wonderful!

[green2griffin]

I dunno dude. cant analyse poetry. xD
I dont like romance or love either so. 4/5 anyway 8D
lol. the "bang" at the end made me laugh tho. xD dunno why. =P
hehehahehahehahehahehaheha
post more!
what about your french one! >=O