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I feel like
I am a robot
Pre-programmed
To recite these prayers,
To sing these hymns
When I was young
I used to dress up
Wear cute dresses
And bouncy pigtails
Where has it all gone?
The love…
The joy…
The excitement…
…the faith?
- Title: Confirmation
- Artist: DDrox316
- Description: im supposed to be confirmed into my church this summer.... but i just dont know............
- Date: 02/22/2009
- Tags: confirmation ddrox316
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Charply - 12/10/2009
- i know what you mean about losing the faith.....i wish i was a kid too.
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- EuphoricEnnui - 12/10/2009
- Structure is however you make it in a poem. Yes, she's telling instead of showing, but regardless you can't tell someone how to structure THEIR poem. How about you take your obviously pompous attitude and shove it up your tail, mmkay? You can offer constructive criticism. All you gave were empty remarks.
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- OneXMuerte - 12/10/2009
- That's not a poem. Structure is off and nothing more too it. You are telling instead of showing. Nothing special.
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- Blackfire Banshee - 02/22/2009
- omg! that's exactly how I feel! i'm the only kid in the church.
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