the point of hell

• Artist: queen siva
• Description: i enjoy poetry, and i wrote this trying to explain my thoughts. please comment and rate.
• Date: 03/05/2009
• Tags: point hell

hell
the fire
burning
the charred bones of simple minded souls
never to breathe again
poor creatures
living in dark
worshipping shadows
forgetting love of all kinds
confused
the deafening noises
screeches in ur ears
scorched humans
lie aminst the ground
the pain is constant
hell

Comments

[Mecha Fullmetal]

I enjoy poetry as well and it is a nice poem even though it's about hell

[soccer biatch]

i dont understand why ur writing about hell but i ges since there is saposible hell someone has to write about it ...other than that i liked it its very interesting... smile