Wishing for breaking

• Artist: BrokenHeir
• Description: When you are attached to someone, the bond between you can never broken, even when you wish it was.
• Date: 03/19/2009
• Tags: wishing breaking

How is it that every time I see you I want to cry? To wrap myself around you and take all your pain? We both know I can't now, I'm too broken to sheild you from the bullets that harm you, I can only get caught and break with the pain, hurt you more. I can never blame you, just myself and the world. I'm a broken shield now, I cast myself away and you got a new shield. I'm supposedly free yet we still seem connected, a chain's kepping me stuck to your life. So I'm forced to see your new shield break you. So I wonder, why I can't I break completly instead?

Comments

[Captain ilovetwilight13]

this is really good, u have alot of potential. you should put one of this to the public and have it debated or you can go sumwhere and have it made into a real song that can go out so the whole world can hear it...keep up the good work smile )

[XxInsaneCheesexX]

Pretty good. You definitly have major potential that you haven't recognized, but your writing is weak at some points. You can do better, but then again, you could definitly do a lot worse.