No Effect Without Cause

• Artist: Tracker Ninja
• Description: This was inspired from stupid people. Everything you do will result in something else happening. If that result is negative or not what you'd hoped, then you can't hide from it.
  
  Writing for a while, first time posting here, enjoy
• Date: 03/21/2009
• Tags: effect without cause

It cannot rain without the clouds
And you cannot fly without your wings

This is a war without an end
Past attempts will repeat

Commitments are nothing on lies
For the very core shakes the truth

So please tell me now
Where is your heart with already a home?

Comments

[Sunafire]

It's so true.
Disturbingly so, thats why I like it.

You can tell you've been writing a while, and it shows smile
Good job!

[Reprogrammed]

I love the part about how it's a war without an end because that's how I feel too there will always be somebody who's fighting. 5/5

[pinkberry1213]

it has true aspects of life to it. good poem.

[Lizabite]

I like it. a lot! it has a great point to it!