I have been found

• Artist: dreamy boi 14
• Description: i once felt so lost that everyone i knew wanted nothing to do with me. I would spend days asking myself wat i did wrong and i almost decided to kill myself.....but then i found the one person who was always there when i needed him....my heavenly father...
• Date: 03/22/2009
• Tags: have been found

i hear the wind blow,
a soft, soothing sound.
In my mind im all alone,
no one is around.

I had a wierd dream
where i woke up to a fear,
to find all my friends and family
no where even near.

i cut myself
and found it appeal,
this was no longer a dream-
it was real.

i had nowhere to do
nowhere to hide,
who was i anymore-
nothing but a figment in my mind.

I threw myself
and feel on my knees,
and saw a light,
gleeming down apon me.

I cried and asked
"what is going on" ?
and i heard a voice that said
"calm down my son"

"you are not hurt,
you shall never perish,
eternal life with me,
you will forever cheerish."

Comments

[DDrox316]

oh, one more thing... cherish is spelled wrong (the last word)

[DDrox316]

That's good, not many poems are written about God, and most are depressing.. haha like mine XP
anyways, weird is spelled wrong in the 2nd stanza, and no where in the 2nd stanza should be one word (nowhere)
...you give me hope 3nodding have a great life (:

Find my stuff in the Arenas!

[dreamy boi 14]

Thank you =]
i dont get that often.....my teacher says i suck at writing. lol

[Cadly]

THIS IS SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! i loved it and you felt so deep when you read it, It was amazing and I am pretty much crying right now (inside not out) you are an amazing writer!!!! 5 STARS!!

[ii_Blushie_ii]

heyy i luv tht poem or watever it was i think it was like life, life is sumtimes like a black hole so its like where did everyone go