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Life is hard.
This is true.
But I will get through,
If I'm with you.
You're never far,
If I call,
In need of a friend
Most of all.
You will come
When I call,
In my time of need,
You won't let me fall.
You guide me though
When I can't see,
Through the pain
In front of me.
When I think of a friend,
I think of you,
And I'll always hope
You'll think of me, too.
- by 1992naruto |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/23/2009 |
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- Title: A Friend
- Artist: 1992naruto
- Description: A poem about a friend of mine who means a lot to me.
- Date: 03/23/2009
- Tags: friend
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Comments (3 Comments)
- yuna0789 - 07/05/2009
- man harsh comments on this one, but i really like it. especially the ending.
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- macalla12 - 03/28/2009
- aw that is so cute! you really have a gift to write poetry. i wish i could write like you. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep on writing
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- rocko11091 - 03/28/2009
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aww...thats cute....flows well too....style is conventional, i like that...concept is cute...try including some figurative language...similies (comparisons using like or as), metaphors (comparisons w/o like or as), maybe a few personifications (non human things showing human characteristics)...
Concept:4/5
Flow: 4/5
Style: 3/5
Fig. Lang.: 1/5
Overall: 3/5 - Report As Spam
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