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On a summer day,
The clouds seem like they want to say,
Cheer up and go on with no sad face
There are more important things like grace.
The sun that is the light bringer,
And the flowers like the melody singer,
That makes the day seem so wonderful
And make the world so colourful.
- by KuroKlebereis |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/02/2009 |
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- Title: Summer Day
- Artist: KuroKlebereis
- Description: I made this poem when i woke up one morning and the sun was shinging so bright that a simple sunshine fall on my face and woke me up. :3
- Date: 04/02/2009
- Tags: summer days flower clouds
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Comments (4 Comments)
- sm00shed ba_Nana_s - 04/12/2009
- Wow Oki, thats some pretty bright sunlight =0
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- b00_2 - 04/07/2009
- You're rhyming form is quite random. The first stanza goes abbb, the second stanza goes aabb. I would change that if i were you. 4/5
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- Infinitypark003 - 04/04/2009
- Ah.. a very nice poem. 5 STAR
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- Mizuburo Inoue - 04/03/2009
- Ah, I love moments like that! thank you for sharing it with us.
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