shut up

• Artist: HHH4ever96
• Description: song-NOT POEM poems are for gay guys
  
  CAPS= screaming
  
  in little box things [EXAMPLE]= whispering
  
  ........= short pause
  
  multiple line spaces= long pause
• Date: 04/12/2009
• Tags: emotional goth metal screaming angry

(drum solo)

[do you think you can hold me back?]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

you tell me...... you love me........... i tell you........ i hate you............ you tell me....... that i don't........ MEAN IIIIIIT!!!!!


YOU SHUT UP!!!!! LISTEN TO ME!!!!! SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
(guitar solo)

[get ready]

[get ready]

[get ready to] DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(another guitar solo)

you tell me........ please stop this.......... you tell me............. don't do this........... you tell me......... you love me......... i tell you............

SHUT UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comments

[Dreaming_of_Flying]

Lol very cute. Did you make it into a song yet?

[XxErotic_LeprosyxX]

i dont exaclty know what to critisize, its short. Very short. Never really seen a song like this. But when you extend and add more letters you may want to change the format so its like in parentheses "((extend the e sounds in a screamo fashion))" get it? ((and thats mean i know guys that are straight and write poetry))

[HHH4ever96]

please give criticism!

[Carlyse13]

Nice!