The forgotten path

• Artist: Ledgendary Hero
• Description: Its a little thing i just made up.
• Date: 04/16/2009
• Tags: gates darkness

The one patch the light forgets,
the one true path
Nobody takes it,
as it is forgotten by all.
Even time itself seems to have left it alone.
Nature, too has not taken foothold,
a barren desolate place.
No life, no death.
The only way there, is through yourself.
The only question is, why would you want to?

Comments

[Poetic Progression]

Brilliant. It's strong, and I like the way you challenge the reader at the end. 5/5 and faving!

[Ledgendary Hero]

Actually, that was no mistake. The path, is the patch of land which the light forgets.

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

wow deep, short, but deep...awsome! in the first ling thought u have patch instead of path, besides that good job ^^