A Hole For Light

• Artist: BnW x3
• Description: I made this poem impromptu, this is based on my recent experiences and my feelings from those. i hope you'll like it:D
• Date: 04/19/2009
• Tags: hole light

Sorrow, how indestructible the word is,
Happiness is what I wanted but i missed.
Storms always struck my unpredictable life,
but where are the rainbows after each and every fight.

I walked alone in a cold, dark and musky road,
I carry with me nothing but unfinished load.
I wanted to escape freely from this agony,
But thought of future laughter and fun.

I decided to go back again to the path,
The path where only God is the light.
I thought of my faith and let fate lead me
To appreciate misery in this challenging little world.

Comments

[emmywinner56]

are you kidding me?this poem was amazing, and if you, vintyy, cannot appreciate that then you are an idiot. 'some teenager' could not have writeen like this. i bet you can't even understand this poem. i bet you can't even understand some of the words. by the way, nice sarcasm. just like every other teenager uses.

[vintyy]

oh wow! cool!

just like every other poem written by some teenager.