The Months of the Real World

• Artist: miosaka
• Description: A poem that personifies the months into tangible characters that are alive in the real world today. If you choose criticize, please don't leave criticism that changes my style to the style of [i]your[/i] choice. On a side note, I have more poems in my journal. View and comment if you like. Thank you. ^^
  
  P.S: January is depicted as insane. A contradictory statement to my "interpretation" thingy, but that's what she is meant to be pictured.
• Date: 04/25/2009
• Tags: months real world serious

Loved mem'ries, can't remember,/
in this dark and bleak December./

January's wint'ry arms,/
have lashed about,/
and caused much harm./

February's so-said "Love spell"'s/
gone forever, deep in-to hell./

March's fleeting height of whimzy,/
gone to Hell on wings so flimsy./

April's light, Devour'd by darkness./
What was nice, now houses heartless./

May has gone, chased off by evil./
Ever gone, because of people./

June does live, but much in sorrow./
Fearing what will come tomorrow./

July's mirth has shrunk in glory,/
all because we loved him poorly./

August's timeless fancy's dwindling./
Shrinking down, like burning kindling./

September's heart is growing smaller,/
Shrinking like it's famous day./
Cracking,Rotting,Dying,Weeping./
Killing her in ev'ry way./

October's fear is growing stronger./
Ruling him with horrid dreams./
He sleeps no longer, always fearing./
Fearing what the darkness brings./

November's king-like rule o'er seasons,/
Lost to humans, with no soul./
Lost to mem'ries, lost to legend./
Lost to people's selfish goals./

December's left, alone and weary./
Weeping in the night, so dreary./
Leaving one to fend her own./
Time for the world to reap what's sown./
11 gone, and one not shown./
I wish to God they would've known./

By:Miosaka

Comments

[miosaka]

Ugh...sorry about the bad description.....stupid character max.....It's meant to be interpreted differently, and I didn't know italics didn't work. The reason for the criticism statement, is that I am a beginning writer, and would like proffesional help.