- Days, I feel like a puppet My life in demented and mutated hands. Days, I feel of royalty Carefree, someone else doing my duties. Days, I feel of camoflauge I'm somber and solitude, no reason atall. Days, I feel of diamond's shine I'm ecstatic, full of courage, I'm one-of-a-kind! biggrin
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- | Submitted on 04/26/2009 |
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- Title: Melodramatic Me
- Artist: PoeticWindstorm
- Description: im a very emotional person (no, not emo :) lol), so my mood is dependent upon the day itself.....this poem is kinda self explanatory lol...so i hope u enjoy it.....and if i could get some feedback and ratings.......i would b very happy!!!!!!!! thanks for readin and have a nice day! ^_____^
- Date: 04/26/2009
- Tags: melodramatic
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Douce Lumiere - 05/15/2009
- Maybe if you put it in poetry format? Otherwise it captures the feeling of change.
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- Inyuashi 23 - 04/26/2009
- Hmmm, repeatative...(gah I hate my spelling) But as for this one, I can't capture the usual feel I get from your work, I'm not really good at this type of poem, so I can't say what needs to be done or anything... It seems like you're trying to capture a feeling with this one, and you've got it somewhat... Chi, I'm not good at poems where I go for feeling, I typically go for image. Now what to rate...
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