Time can't erase.

• Artist: Keira Elizabethh
• Description:
• Date: 05/01/2009
• Tags: time cant erase

Life begins perfectly
the way it should be
but something makes it see different
its how we act upon time

Your regrets, your lies i lived dispised
i fell for it all just leave me
why cant i have a normal life?

everything you go through
just passes by because you cant erase it
time cant stand still, and you cant go back
nothing can be changed once its done

Change your ways now
Maybe you can change for once
I wont deal anymore
I wish i could go back and erase myself
Wipe myself from humanity...never be born

Maybe then time can erase me

nothing can erase what you did or what you've done
but maybe if you see...
it can change what you do....

Comments

[Killa-Keyblade Master-]

Also, gave this a 4/5.

[Killa-Keyblade Master-]

Ahhh I so love when a good poem or writing comes together. Nothing about this needs to be changed except spelling corrections. Maybe since you are good at this, go for something not so personal. You seem like you are good at personal experiences already. Maybe a poem about the flexibility of a cat, or the zooming of a fast car, or dew on a rose?