Friends

• Artist: XxxNeon SkittlezxxX
• Description: Poem
• Date: 05/02/2009
• Tags: friends

are we friends,or are we not?,you told me once, but I forgot,tell me now,tell me true,so can I say, Im here for you,of all the friends ive ever met,your the one I wont forget,and if I die,befor you do,ill go to heaven,and wait for you,Ill give the angels back their wings, and risk the loss of everything,just to prove, my friendship is true,to have a friend like you.

Comments

[Miss Mintie]

I feel like the stanzas need to be separated, it will help the flow.

Also, in the last few lines, the rhyming is a bit off.

[Flirty Aly-47]

that is very good! razz