-
nightmare
as I open my
eyes, I wonder why I still
wake to such nightmares
- by Ellectric Eccentric |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/03/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: Nightmare
- Artist: Ellectric Eccentric
-
Description:
just a haiku :D
not really though ;) - Date: 05/03/2009
- Tags: nightmare
- Report Post
- Reference Image:
-
Comments (3 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 05/29/2009
- It is a haiku. It isn't supposed to be long. Haiku is a form of economical poetics. The goal it so say in 17 syllables something deep, meaningful, and beautiful. You've done a decent job, here. Not amazing, but a competent poem.
- Report As Spam
- elizacookie - 05/16/2009
-
I think you should post longer stuff...
But then what do I know? - Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
