Curst

• Artist: Valoralin
• Description: I wrought this song for a movie I had seen. Tell me what u think of it, ^_^
• Date: 05/04/2009
• Tags: curst

This small town girl (she wanted to be a singer) just got off a buss in New York and this old man asked her why she was here in New York. She tells him and he says he can help her with that, that he could make her big in New York. She trusts him and dose what he tells her to do. They get a CD made and he tells her he will get all the things needed done for her if she sine’s a contract with him, and so she dose. Soon after she is singing and dancing in a strip show with none of her songs and is forced strip as she sings till her 15 year contract is over.

I feel the hold around my neck
I see the chain where it connects
With your collar around my neck
I feel the pull of your harsh jerk
Your chain of lies still holds me strong
Your collar of pain is still latched on

You lied to me, you cosed this pain
You forced this burden upon me
I never asked for what you gave
I never asked to be chained
I never wished for this restraint
But now I see you had this all planed

Some day I will break this chain
And some day I will over come this pain
But till that day arrives
I’ll have to cope with this life
Till that day comes when I see the light

You lied to me, you cosed this pain
You forced this burden upon me
I never asked for what you gave
I never asked to be chained
I never wished for this restraint
But now I see you had this all planed
From the very start you planed my end

Comments

[Princess Arcainess]

What movie did you write thiz for ?? 'Tiz good biggrin

[tjenator]

wow. is that accidental rhyme, because there is a lot of it. it is really good

[Valoralin]

It's a song with a description for it ^_^

[coolmarcus]

nice story or poem