The sun

• Artist: 101 bubbles
• Description: This is an elegy of the sun. I had to wright this for class so don't think im emo or anything.
  
  
  
  
• Date: 05/08/2009
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It was dim and cold,
there were barly any stars.
She was very bold,
though she knew her time would come.

She lived brave and hard,
for centurys on end.
She was bright in her early years,
but know she's coming to an end.
So she smiled as she went and know everyone is dead.

She faded out century's ago,
and know there is no life.
Since life can only live,
if there is some light.

Comments

[101 bubbles]

ya i know i spell bad

[Tokyo Atom]

its good, but please proofread once a gain if you have not!