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The Dragon crushes,
it's fire ignites the remains.
The prince of the air.
The Dragon, the Serpent,
has come to steal and kill.
Fueled by rage and revenge,
The prince of Evil returns to take our will.
The Dragon looks so mighty,
How it fills the earth with raging fire.
The Serpent is so seemingly keen,
With its speed and venom so dire.
But the Dragon lost to my King,
Fire couldn't harm its creator,
And the Serpent lost to my friend,
Jesus crushed the Snake, our hater.
Slithering faster,
the Serpent wallows and dies,
Yay! Its head is crushed!
- by 290DarkStars |
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- | Submitted on 05/20/2009 |
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- Title: The Dragon- The Serpent
- Artist: 290DarkStars
- Description: I wrote tis in Hiku, xaxa xaxa xaxa hiku format... Hope you enjoy ^^ (By the way..... Its all 100% true ^^)
- Date: 05/20/2009
- Tags: dragon serpent
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Comments (7 Comments)
- 290DarkStars - 05/23/2009
- Thank you... see... this is the kind of stuff that I wanna hear.. thank you Mutandanstan ^^
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- Mutandanstan - 05/23/2009
- the last stanza seems to be out of place, as though it doesn't fit very well with the rest of your poem, maybe revise it or get rid of it?
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- 290DarkStars - 05/22/2009
- And plus... I dont give a s**t about your ******** Pegan thoughts... Im talking from a christians perspective... the right perspective... so dont turn this thing into a religious war on who's right.. ok? In order to read something you gotta be open to what the reader says.. if you dont like it then throw it out... man... you obviously asre not the god of skills...
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- 290DarkStars - 05/22/2009
- Wow, open your bible dumbass... you might learn a thing or two... you should know what the person is talking about before you totally embarass yourself in your comment... I advise the book of Genisisand Revelation... those two hold the images... gosh people... wise up...
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- God_of_Skills - 05/22/2009
- I don't like your metaphors. Since you are refering to the snake in the garden of eden, which is commonly believed to be Lilith. Lilith is a real god in paganism. Also, a dragon has nothing to do with your devil or Lilith. Well that's my rave for tonight.
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- 290DarkStars - 05/21/2009
- Oh c'mon... Luna just happens to be on every night ^^ thats all... Its not like Luna is the only one thast I want to hear from... I want to hear everyone... EVERYONES opinion on this...
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- Buttercup Veela - 05/21/2009
- wait wat about satan?! sry, i had to ask. im not gonna comment anymore cuz i already know that "Luna" is gonna say wat i would.
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