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Crumble until i break
this evil heartache
i ask why oh why
i hope i dont die
rip and bleed
and cry in need
now i need you more than ever
i love you now and forever
drip goes my blood
i feel the pain
starting a flood
i feel it in my vain
i'm bleeding as an open cut
this torture, this pain
i embrace the pain in my gut
like sitting in the rain
- by heyitsshelby |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/22/2009 |
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- Title: my 8 line poem please read
- Artist: heyitsshelby
- Description: sad depressing poems not bothering for grammar
- Date: 05/22/2009
- Tags: line poem please read depressing
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Comments (7 Comments)
- heyitsshelby - 05/30/2009
- awful like bad or awfully sad
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- Victime of Torture - 05/29/2009
- awefull 5/5
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- adorably_vicious - 05/28/2009
- I love this! Great job!
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- xXCo0ki3sXx - 05/23/2009
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this is beautiful. although I'm not emo, I love it.
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- ExtremelyAwesomeWolf - 05/22/2009
- awesome poetry. 5/5
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- MusicalMisfit - 05/22/2009
- ..........beautiful....... very emo i like it even though im not emo
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- heyitsshelby - 05/22/2009
- oops umm i messed up it goes i love you now and forever
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