Shot Through The Goodbyes

• Artist: Jlouiseost
• Description: i wrote this when i was in a bit of a depressing mood..
  
  please be nice..
  
  p.s some people said i should change the rust to rot but i dont no :)
• Date: 05/28/2009
• Tags: silence through goodbye pain rust

I don’t have a voice
I’m almost never heard
Before you left I had colour in me
But now I’m dying in shame
I’m sick of this life and the games you play
Leaving me here to rust away
The pain I’m in is unexplainable
Almost completely unforgivable
Before you left me you said that you loved me
And I almost thought it true
But I guess now goodbye is forever
And so I say goodbye to you

Comments

[Dark Devia]

Very good, I like it.
And One thing about stuff like this (poetry, songs, ect.) Don't worry about what other people say you should change it to. Obviously your wording is what spoke the best for you at that moment, and that sense of feeling is the true art form.

[jenchisama]

awwwwwww naww i love it !!!!!!!! so sad and sweet! it goest to my favourites!

[alina the beautiful]

i love it an dont change a thing its wonderful...ur a good poet =]