Taken away

• Artist: Harley Quinn Twin
• Description: I wrote to show that i'm sad about my boyfriend going off to jail.
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• Date: 06/02/2009
• Tags: taken away

I can't let go
Your hand begins to slip
away.

You tell me that you love me
and has they're taking you
away.

They told you not to
look back,
it would only make it worse,
and you walk away.

I stand and watch
tears pour as I cry
I wipe them away.

3weeks since you've been
gone
The flower that you gave me on
Valentines day
is rotting away.

Every thorn on a rose
pierces me in the heart
every time you say goodbye.

People, your & my friends
begin to worry about me.

I sit on the front step
waiting for you to
come back.

the rain is pounding down on me
I will not move
Until I will see you again.

Comments

[Lynemrac]

This poem is really amazing.
Wish I could describe it with more words
but I don't know any other extraordinary words. :/
This would probably be one of my favorites though. :]
I hope you'll see your boyfriend soon.

[Waffle Flavored Boxers]

Awwww.
That's pretty heart-wrenching, sweetie.
This indeed, is a very moving poem.
You could use some work on your grammer and spelling, but otherwise, this is star material.
Good luck.
:]

[CrucioMeDarling]

I'm sorry about your boyfriend.
This is a beautiful poem.