a girl

• Artist: MUNKI3_GIRL
• Description: this poem is bout a girl who just likes to fantasize bout someone she really likes but she just isnt reconized
• Date: 06/06/2009
• Tags: girl

when i look at you i get this crazy feelin deep inside
nd i dont no wat is or were it comes from
but all i no is dat i love this crazy feelling deep inside of me.. heart

when im far away from u i miss u nd i dont no y
u never seem to notice me
but that still hasnt changed my mind
ill wait for u till i u notice me

nd one day wen u do ill be there to say i do..

Comments

[guess beaniewatson]

okay so i dont like the abbreviations but other than that, its pretty good. 3/5

[Loverz213]

sweet very touching..lol

[Aaliyah-Alica1]

i so feel her pain. awesome writting. some spelling errors but who cares. it was great.

[MUNKI3_GIRL]

um thankz for who ever has rated..nd um if u guys would like to comment me for watever reason if u think itz good or bad..plz dont hesitate to do so!!!thankz =-)