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the thorns poking at my feet
as I hike the mountain of life
climbing higher
I climb
and climb
with the thorns poking at me
the thorns
such irritating thorns
they poke at my feet
but I never stop
to take the thorns
out of my shoe
never
have the right words
to get rid of the thorns
so as I climb higher
and higher
I make it to the top
of the mountain of life
only to find
I'll be pushed
back down
and die
back at the bottom of the mountain
i lie
dead and
at my end
of my hike
- by Xxhells bloodxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/07/2009 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- DeathLies - 06/13/2009
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Hm. I like this perspective,
life is full of troubles, and it's like a never ending hike,
and at the top you seem to get pushed down,
and you die or you find a way to catch yourself.
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- Pyromatic Rabbit - 06/12/2009
- Very intense and written with such grace and beaty
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- VampireNicoleCullen - 06/10/2009
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Beautiful x
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101440191#title - Report As Spam
- Ara Kigarashi - 06/10/2009
- wow. that was intense. i liked it alot.
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