~*~Her Smile~*~

• Artist: -cpt kuchiki-
• Description: the beauty of a true female
• Date: 06/08/2009
• Tags: smile beauty female

Her smile can kill
As she passes by
My heart is thrill
As she catch my eye

Envy her man
Lust!
Is it not?
A test at hand

He falls for her radiance
The smoothness of her skin
The look in her eye
Show the beauty within

Innocent? Yes
Her deviance hide
Behind that Beautiful face
and those Sparkling eyes

Comments

[PoeticJustice_07]

hey everyone its kuchiki got hacked recently, look at my char for more poems ok

[xXSilly_CanniblesXx]

ok coming from a girl that was absolutly beautiful. Ive never heard a man explain a woman that way its always been hott or sexy never radiant. And i loved it, again that was amazing i really enjoyed it ^-^

[dogburgers]

makes me kinda horny

[Yewix]

Great poem but the second stanza seems a little bit short. This goes by your personal opinion but I personaly think it is too small lines. Other than that it is a great poem that I realy enjoyed