goodbye simple days

• Artist: saiga heretic
• Description: this poem is about the effects that fallings in love can effect people
• Date: 06/13/2009
• Tags: goodbye simple days

I need, I feel a love
you love to love the fear
I never want to be alone
I've forgotten to.....

the world keeps moveing clouds
the clouds become unreal
I guess I'll always be at home
do you want me to try
directing your night

An exit lights the sky
the sky becomes complete
traveling hearts divide the throne
I've forgotten to.....

friction, lines, bumps
they will always deplete
the sighs are all turning right
do you want me to try
directing your night

the purest forms of life
our days our never coming back
the cannons of our times
the days are never coming back

the purest forms of life
our days are never coming back
the cannons of our times our
days our never ever coming back......

Comments

[fawn freckles]

It's kind of sad, tragic, and true. Love can be bittersweet but none the less beautiful. Your poem is really good. I give you 5 stars (despite a little typo here and there).

[Cyanide11]

I for some reason pictured someone (could be a guy or a girl) taking a random exit. They're driving, they're running away from something...

really good.

[nadby]

really really i like it, is so wonderful, you are so intense. i love you :.)....

[xlelixnessax]

Very beautiful...i love it