I Am Nothing

• Artist: Mimi-chan Uchiha
• Description: A poem for the normal person, the not special, not infamous group of us. Please give fair ratings/commets, and if you odn't hve anything nice/constuctive to say, don't say anything at all. Ty!
• Date: 06/17/2009
• Tags: nothing normal unpopular masses blend

What am I, you ask?
I am not tall, small, large, or skinny.
I am not poor, nor rich.
I have not suffered terrible loss.
I have not gone through something amazing.
I have not felt true happiness, and nothing else.
I am not a misunderstood race,
I don’t have anything really rare or astounding about me.
I have not had to overcome a great obstacle.

But at the same time, I am everything.

People always admire those who have done something great
and overcome some obstacle
instead of themselves.
Even if a person had not done or accomplished
anything truly astounding,
have not felt the pain of exclusion from society,
nor had great wealth or looks,
they are someone, great in themselves.

I am nothing, I am everything, and I am proud.

Comments

[Mimi-chan Uchiha]

Thanks so much for your honest opinion! I'll take that into consideration... you're right, I suppose. =P

[Adai Eunae]

The wording is very nice but, from my point of veiw, having to overcome no obstical is an obstical. What im trying to say is that someone like that woukld have no real knowlage of the world. And if you think ive missed something tell me please. I really love constructive critisicm. ^^

[Mtoro]

Wow.
The poem is so powerful!
Really nice- I need to favorite it!