gone too soon

• Artist: sillyjoker13
• Description: this is about my dad who has died recently,it doesnt rhyme, but i still hope you like it.
• Date: 06/26/2009
• Tags: gone soon

Who made me laugh when i wanted to cry,

Who was there when i needed someone to talk to,

Who would be with me when i was alone,

Who would tuck me in at night,

You were there dad,

And i love you.

I hope you are in a better place now.

You were so young,

And thats how i know,

That god must have had a spiritual purpose for you,

Ill always cherish those 4 last words,

Goodbye, I Love You,

You Were, Gone Too Soon.

Comments

[kamahaazi]

the feel is good. and I know writing about things you feel strongly for, the right words don't rhyme, but if I were writing it, I would give it more structure.

[vampgalforever]

its really good. i lost my dad to a car accident so iundrestandthat pain that goes through you in these kind of expericances.i only had 6 years with my dad i hope you got longer. and i hope his death was fast so he felt no pain even if the pain he left behind in the hearts of the people left is enough to kill. i know mine was.

[sillyjoker13]

please tell me what you felt when you read this, i poured my heart out on it, so plz comment.

[sillyjoker13]

plz commen and tell what you think