Eclipse

• Artist: xx-magentalvr-14-xx
• Description: i wrote this in 8th grade for my fav class (english) taught by my fav teacher Mr Reck.
  
  please tell me what you think of my poetry i dont know if im any good.
• Date: 07/02/2009
• Tags: eclipse

Your beautiful smile
Your crazed mind

You think of one thing
and only one thing

I won't tell what
just that it's me

I hide in the dark
though i try not

You don't know I'm thinking
even if it's about you

Maybe someday
I'll win you again

I wish, I dream
I believe.

Comments

[Kurai Tenshi_dark angel]

as a writer i have to say this is very good its to the point but it leaves an air of mystery. good job 5/5

[karilz tnt]

o ok =)

[-Tessifer]

I lurve itt.
5/5.

[Lovely Angela]

I like it!