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You once were named
Never was famed
You always felt ashamed
And was often betrayed
No one really knew you
You felt like you're new
Everyday was nothing good
Everyone was freakin' rude
You wanted to die
But was afraid to try
Every night you cry
Was never worth the while
You wished that someday you'll find
Someone who will be kind
Kind enough to smile and laugh
Kind enough to care and love
But the person you were waiting
Did not come and sing
The lovely sound of of your romance
And you'll never have the chance
So now you're buried
Under that cold earth and worried
If your name he ever shouted
But you just never heard
- by PorncakesForZombiesOnly |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/03/2009 |
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- Title: My Undying Love [sad poem]
- Artist: PorncakesForZombiesOnly
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- Date: 07/03/2009
- Tags: undying love poem
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Comments (7 Comments)
- PorncakesForZombiesOnly - 07/04/2009
- yay more comments....and ratings 83
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- Pyro Calypso - 07/04/2009
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It's pretty good, but kinda awkward sounding to me in certain parts.
But still good. :] Very emotional.
4/5. - Report As Spam
- SweeTxChix - 07/04/2009
- hey nicework gurl!!!i rate it 5!
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- Salad of the Dead - 07/04/2009
- That was beautifully done. Keep up the great work!
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- OwOTamaki SuohOwO - 07/03/2009
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Good job c:! I like it, it's interesting.
5/5
Keep up the good work, good luck ^^! - Report As Spam
- PorncakesForZombiesOnly - 07/03/2009
- ...thanks for the comment i didnt really know how i made this...maybe my mind speaks up what my feelings want to say...
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- Deathly Black Rose 15 - 07/03/2009
- I kno how that feels only i didnt really die not yet anyways.
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